书面表达
假如你是李华。春节临近， 你所在的城市将举行剪纸展览。你得知你的外教Jenny对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容主要包括：
1. 展览的时间和地点;
2. 简要介绍中国剪纸;
3. 简要介绍展览内容。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
注意：开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Hua
【范文】Dear Jenny,
How is everything? Recently, with the Chinese New Year approaching, an exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting will be held in our city library this weekend. Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition.
Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. Paper cuts are not only used for patterns on clothing, decoration but for religious purposes and have been an important part of everyday life in China. As for the display itself, you will have the chance to enjoy all kinds of beautiful paper cuts. What’s more, you can’t miss the DIY part. I’m sure it’s worth a visit.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。假如你是李华，请写一封邮件邀请外教Jenny参观剪纸展览。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 展览的时间和地点；2. 简要介绍中国剪纸；3. 简要介绍展览内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：traditional Chinese culture， date back to ，be used for ，as for， worth a visit ，look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了with的复合结构：with the Chinese New Year approaching；使用了一些固定词组，如：date back to ， worth a visit ，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假如你是李华。春节临近， 你所在的城市将举行剪纸展览。你得知你的外教Jenny对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请写一封邮件，邀请他参观展览。内容主要包括：
1. 展览的时间和地点;
2. 简要介绍中国剪纸;
3. 简要介绍展览内容。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
注意：开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
Dear Jenny,
______________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Hua
【范文】Dear Jenny,
How is everything? Recently, with the Chinese New Year approaching, an exhibition on Chinese paper-cutting will be held in our city library this weekend. Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition.
Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. Paper cuts are not only used for patterns on clothing, decoration but for religious purposes and have been an important part of everyday life in China. As for the display itself, you will have the chance to enjoy all kinds of beautiful paper cuts. What’s more, you can’t miss the DIY part. I’m sure it’s worth a visit.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。假如你是李华，请写一封邮件邀请外教Jenny参观剪纸展览。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 展览的时间和地点；2. 简要介绍中国剪纸；3. 简要介绍展览内容。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：traditional Chinese culture， date back to ，be used for ，as for， worth a visit ，look forward to。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all， Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then， Finally， In the end，At last， Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition， as well as， not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to the exhibition. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；Paper-cutting is a Chinese folk art with a long history, which dates back to the time of the Northern and Southern Dynasty. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了with的复合结构：with the Chinese New Year approaching；使用了一些固定词组，如：date back to ， worth a visit ，look forward to。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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