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假定你是李华，现在是大一新生。你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：
1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。
2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。
3. 对老师表示祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Wang,
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mr. Wang,
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.
Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。
【详解】
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封感谢信：现在是大一新生的李华高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。3. 对老师表示祝福。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: express my thanks for 表达我的感谢；were very patient with耐心；because of your encouragement因为您的鼓励等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如虚拟语气Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University.定语从句的运用I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，现在是大一新生。你高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：
1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。
2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。
3. 对老师表示祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Wang,
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Mr. Wang,
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help! I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English. Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University. I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school. My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class. My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.
Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream. I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文。
【详解】
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封感谢信：现在是大一新生的李华高三时在王老师的帮助下，英语进步很大，为表示感谢，给王老师写一封感谢信。要点如下：1. 梦想成真，考上理想大学。2. 因为王老师的辅导和鼓励，英语由差变好。3. 对老师表示祝福。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组) , 如: express my thanks for 表达我的感谢；were very patient with耐心；because of your encouragement因为您的鼓励等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如虚拟语气Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University.定语从句的运用I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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