书面表达 你是交流生Li Ming，在加拿大期间得到了加拿大同学Bob的很多热心帮助，但回国时把Bob曾借他德贝多芬交响乐的CD(CD of Beethoven's symphonies)放
英语作文范文 03-07
书面表达
你是交流生Li Ming，在加拿大期间得到了加拿大同学Bob的很多热心帮助，但回国时把Bob曾借他德贝多芬交响乐的CD(CD of Beethoven's symphonies)放在行李箱拿了回来，给他写一封道歉信。
对在加拿大期间Bob的帮助表示感谢
告知CD事件，并用快递(Express Mail Service)寄回CD
因此造成的不便向他道歉
Dear Bob,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【范文】I’m writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.
To begin with, I’d like to take this opportunity to extend my heat-felt appreciation to the kind assistance you have offered me during my stay in Canada. What’s more, I borrowed one CD of Beethoven’s symphonies from you in Canada. Unfortunately, when I returned home, I found to my surprise that CD in my personal baggage due to my carelessness. To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused.
I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封道歉信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封道歉信：你是交流生Li Ming，在加拿大期间得到了加拿大同学Bob的很多热心帮助，但回国时把Bob曾借他德贝多芬交响乐的CD(CD of Beethoven's symphonies)放在行李箱拿了回来，给他写一封道歉信。1.对在加拿大期间Bob的帮助表示感谢；2.告知CD事件，并用快递(Express Mail Service)寄回CD；3.因此造成的不便向他道歉。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：express my sincere apology to you（向你表达真诚的道歉）；in my personal baggage（在我个人的行李里）；meet your wishes（满足你的愿望）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封道歉信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；when I returned home, I found to my surprise that CD in my personal baggage due to my carelessness.句中when引导时间状语从句；To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service.动词不定式做目的状语；please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused.句中使用定语从句；另外，To begin with, What’s more,
Unfortunately, Once again,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
你是交流生Li Ming，在加拿大期间得到了加拿大同学Bob的很多热心帮助，但回国时把Bob曾借他德贝多芬交响乐的CD(CD of Beethoven's symphonies)放在行李箱拿了回来，给他写一封道歉信。
对在加拿大期间Bob的帮助表示感谢
告知CD事件，并用快递(Express Mail Service)寄回CD
因此造成的不便向他道歉
Dear Bob,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【范文】I’m writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.
To begin with, I’d like to take this opportunity to extend my heat-felt appreciation to the kind assistance you have offered me during my stay in Canada. What’s more, I borrowed one CD of Beethoven’s symphonies from you in Canada. Unfortunately, when I returned home, I found to my surprise that CD in my personal baggage due to my carelessness. To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service. Once again, please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused.
I hope the settlement of the matter will meet your wishes.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封道歉信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一封道歉信：你是交流生Li Ming，在加拿大期间得到了加拿大同学Bob的很多热心帮助，但回国时把Bob曾借他德贝多芬交响乐的CD(CD of Beethoven's symphonies)放在行李箱拿了回来，给他写一封道歉信。1.对在加拿大期间Bob的帮助表示感谢；2.告知CD事件，并用快递(Express Mail Service)寄回CD；3.因此造成的不便向他道歉。
第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：express my sincere apology to you（向你表达真诚的道歉）；in my personal baggage（在我个人的行李里）；meet your wishes（满足你的愿望）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文是一封道歉信，内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I’m writing the letter to inform you that I wish to express my sincere apology to you.句中使用that引导的宾语从句；when I returned home, I found to my surprise that CD in my personal baggage due to my carelessness.句中when引导时间状语从句；To solve the problem, I would like to send this CD to you by Express Mail Service.动词不定式做目的状语；please accept my sincere apology for any inconvenience that I have caused.句中使用定语从句；另外，To begin with, What’s more,
Unfortunately, Once again,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
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