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中国赢得2022年第二十四届冬季奥林匹克运动会的举办权，假如你叫王刚，你想在2022年做一名冬奥会的志愿者，请你写一封推荐信给冬奥会组委会介绍自己的情况。
1. 个人情况：（1）阳光中学九年级（2）班的班长；
（2）爱好：读书，读书的感悟（至少两点）；
（3）喜欢的颜色：自己发挥，并说出喜欢的原因（至少两点）；
2. 个人自荐条件：（1）自信：不害怕在全校面前演讲，善于与他人打交道；
（2）办事有条理；保持一切井井有条，从来不会忘记需要做的事情；
（3）乐于助人：（举1-2个事例）
要求1.词数100字左右，开头和结尾不计入总字数。 2.必须包括所有要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear:
I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Wang Gang
【f范文】Dear:
I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it.I am very confident so I can do things well. I am often willing to help others when they are in trouble. My favourite color is green because green can make me feel comfortable. I like playing basketball and I have been chosen to the basketball team. But I spend too much time playing basketball. My parents are very strict with me and they don’t allow me to play basketball. I will communicate with my parents. I hope I can achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Wang Gang
【解析】
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，我想在2022年做一名冬奥会的志愿者，写一封推荐信给冬奥会组委会介绍自己的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……，I’d like to……，My favourite color is……，I like…….，I will…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要作为2022年冬奥会的一名志愿者，接下来介绍我的个人情况以及自荐条件，最后指出我期望收到对方的回信。此处would like to, in trouble, like doing sth, spend time doing sth, be strict with, allow sb to do sth, communicate with, agree with, hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
中国赢得2022年第二十四届冬季奥林匹克运动会的举办权，假如你叫王刚，你想在2022年做一名冬奥会的志愿者，请你写一封推荐信给冬奥会组委会介绍自己的情况。
1. 个人情况：（1）阳光中学九年级（2）班的班长；
（2）爱好：读书，读书的感悟（至少两点）；
（3）喜欢的颜色：自己发挥，并说出喜欢的原因（至少两点）；
2. 个人自荐条件：（1）自信：不害怕在全校面前演讲，善于与他人打交道；
（2）办事有条理；保持一切井井有条，从来不会忘记需要做的事情；
（3）乐于助人：（举1-2个事例）
要求1.词数100字左右，开头和结尾不计入总字数。 2.必须包括所有要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Dear:
I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Wang Gang
【f范文】Dear:
I’m very excited to hear that China has successfully bid for the success of the 2022 Winter Olympics. I’d like to be a volunteer for it.I am very confident so I can do things well. I am often willing to help others when they are in trouble. My favourite color is green because green can make me feel comfortable. I like playing basketball and I have been chosen to the basketball team. But I spend too much time playing basketball. My parents are very strict with me and they don’t allow me to play basketball. I will communicate with my parents. I hope I can achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
If you can agree with me , I will improve myself in all aspects(方面). I’m sure I will be an excellent volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Wang Gang
【解析】
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，我想在2022年做一名冬奥会的志愿者，写一封推荐信给冬奥会组委会介绍自己的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m very excited to hear that……，I’d like to……，My favourite color is……，I like…….，I will…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要作为2022年冬奥会的一名志愿者，接下来介绍我的个人情况以及自荐条件，最后指出我期望收到对方的回信。此处would like to, in trouble, like doing sth, spend time doing sth, be strict with, allow sb to do sth, communicate with, agree with, hear from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
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