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假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
1. 感谢他的关注；2. 简要介绍相关情况；3. 谈谈你的感想。
参考词汇：环保购物袋 environment-friendly shopping bag
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear David,
In your letter you asked me about the use of environment-friendly shopping bags in China. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China. Well, here is some information about it.
Plastic bags are of great convenience for us, but it may also cause what we call “white pollution”. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources. After all, we should protect the earth so that we have a clean place to stay in.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇书信应用文。要求考生写一封回信，向美国笔友介绍环保购物袋在中国的使用情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.感谢关注
2.简单介绍相关情况
1）原因（plastic bags; pollute）
2）环保购物袋的好处（treat）
3 感想（approve of; protect the earth）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also
第三步：连词成句
1. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.
2. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.
3. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
4. Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1）表因果关系：because, as, for, so, thus, therefore, as a result
2）表目的关系：so that
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
1）It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.这句话用了it作形式主语的主语从句结构“it occurred to sb. that…”
2）Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.这句话中包含了一个非谓语结构作状语“Having the largest population in the world,”和一个非限制性定语从句“which contributes to pollution”。
3）Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.这句话既有“Faced with this problem”作过去分词结构作原因状语，也有“hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution”现在分词作目的状语，同时还包含非限制性定语从句“which can be treated when they are of no use”
2.使用了一些固定词组，如it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华。David是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下：
1. 感谢他的关注；2. 简要介绍相关情况；3. 谈谈你的感想。
参考词汇：环保购物袋 environment-friendly shopping bag
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear David,
In your letter you asked me about the use of environment-friendly shopping bags in China. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China. Well, here is some information about it.
Plastic bags are of great convenience for us, but it may also cause what we call “white pollution”. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources. After all, we should protect the earth so that we have a clean place to stay in.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇书信应用文。要求考生写一封回信，向美国笔友介绍环保购物袋在中国的使用情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.感谢关注
2.简单介绍相关情况
1）原因（plastic bags; pollute）
2）环保购物袋的好处（treat）
3 感想（approve of; protect the earth）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also
第三步：连词成句
1. It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.
2. Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.
3. Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.
4. Actually, I approve of the use of such bags due to the fact that they can not only protect the environment but also save natural resources.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1）表因果关系：because, as, for, so, thus, therefore, as a result
2）表目的关系：so that
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：
1）It never occurred to me that you have known so much about China.这句话用了it作形式主语的主语从句结构“it occurred to sb. that…”
2）Having the largest population in the world, China uses the most plastic bags in the world, which contributes to pollution.这句话中包含了一个非谓语结构作状语“Having the largest population in the world,”和一个非限制性定语从句“which contributes to pollution”。
3）Faced with this problem, the government has decided to encourage people to use environment-friendly shopping bags, which can be treated when they are of no use, instead of plastic ones, hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution.这句话既有“Faced with this problem”作过去分词结构作原因状语，也有“hoping this can effectively reduce white pollution”现在分词作目的状语，同时还包含非限制性定语从句“which can be treated when they are of no use”
2.使用了一些固定词组，如it occurred to sb. that…; contribute to; be faced with; encourage sb. to do; instead of; approve of; not only…but also等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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