应用文写作 为了迎接奥运会，某英文报社举办了校园“体育周”活动。其中一项是征文比赛，请同学们谈一谈自己最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示以“My Favorite Sport” 为题，写一篇文章参赛。要点
英语作文范文 02-29
应用文写作
为了迎接奥运会，某英文报社举办了校园“体育周”活动。其中一项是征文比赛，请同学们谈一谈自己最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示以“My Favorite Sport” 为题，写一篇文章参赛。要点如下：
1.最喜欢的运动是什么；
2.为什么喜欢这项运动。
注意： 1.必须包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2.词数：100 左右。
My Favorite Sport
Sports are an important part of my life.
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【范文】My Favorite Sport
Sports are an important part of my life. I not only like watching the sports games, but also like playing sports. My favorite sport is basketball. Firstly, it can help me to keep healthy and happy. Secondly, I can make a lot of friends through playing basketball and we can share our successes and failures. I can also learn a lot from playing basketball with others, and it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team. And every player should cooperate with other players in the team. So, I insist on playing it with my friends and classmates every day.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，为了迎接奥运会，某英文报社举办了校园“体育周”活动。其中一项是征文比赛，请同学们谈一谈自己最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示以“My Favorite Sport” 为题，写一篇文章参赛。要点如下：1.最喜欢的运动是什么；2.为什么喜欢这项运动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：like doing sth.(喜欢做某事)；keep healthy (保持健康)；make a lot of friends (交许多朋友)；cooperate with (合作)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I not only like watching the sports games, but also like playing sports.运用了not only…but also…结构；I can also learn a lot from playing basketball with others, and it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
为了迎接奥运会，某英文报社举办了校园“体育周”活动。其中一项是征文比赛，请同学们谈一谈自己最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示以“My Favorite Sport” 为题，写一篇文章参赛。要点如下：
1.最喜欢的运动是什么；
2.为什么喜欢这项运动。
注意： 1.必须包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2.词数：100 左右。
My Favorite Sport
Sports are an important part of my life.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】My Favorite Sport
Sports are an important part of my life. I not only like watching the sports games, but also like playing sports. My favorite sport is basketball. Firstly, it can help me to keep healthy and happy. Secondly, I can make a lot of friends through playing basketball and we can share our successes and failures. I can also learn a lot from playing basketball with others, and it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team. And every player should cooperate with other players in the team. So, I insist on playing it with my friends and classmates every day.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，为了迎接奥运会，某英文报社举办了校园“体育周”活动。其中一项是征文比赛，请同学们谈一谈自己最喜欢的运动。请你根据以下提示以“My Favorite Sport” 为题，写一篇文章参赛。要点如下：1.最喜欢的运动是什么；2.为什么喜欢这项运动。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：like doing sth.(喜欢做某事)；keep healthy (保持健康)；make a lot of friends (交许多朋友)；cooperate with (合作)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I not only like watching the sports games, but also like playing sports.运用了not only…but also…结构；I can also learn a lot from playing basketball with others, and it makes me understand that there is no “I” in the team.运用了宾语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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