假设你是李华，你校广播站正在招收英文编辑，请你根据以下提示，向负责此事的外教Mr. Mark 申请这一职位。要点包括：
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作思路】
本题要求用英文写份书面求职申请。应该注意以下几点：
1.大方得体，不落俗套。应尽可能彰显个性，做到与众不同，方能抓住机会；
2.言简意赅，引人入胜。求职信属于应用文，言辞要求正式、庄重、准确，忌调侃、俏皮、花哨、夸夸其谈；3.充满自信，态度诚恳。自己首先得信心十足，但不能自吹自擂，满篇浮夸，不能少了敬语、祝颂语。
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Mark,
I’m writing to apply for an English editor of our school broadcasting station.
I’m qualified for the position for the following reasons. First, I have a good command of English communication skills and take great interest in journalism. Second, I was a part-time reporter in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced and from whom I learned a lot.
I really hope I will be one of you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点点击
所给范文主题明确，结构完整。重点突出，详略得当。语言正式、得体、准确、流畅、地道，词汇与句式高级，摈弃铅华但不失文采。关联词语运用得恰到好处，使整个语篇衔接紧密，逻辑清楚。难能可贵的是，复杂结构和高级词汇的运用为短文增彩不少。
关联词语：first，second(排序信号词)；in addition(附加信号词)等。
亮点词组：be qualified for而非be suitable for；have a good command of 而非be good at；take great interest in 而非 be very interested in等。
高级句式：which引导的非限制性定语从句；by whom... and from whom... (定语从句连用)等。
| 职位要求 | 1.有很强的英语表达能力； 2.关心时事。 |
| 个人优势 | 1.有做记者的经历,沟通能力强； 2.父亲是一位专职编辑,深受其影响； 3.…… |
1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题要求用英文写份书面求职申请。应该注意以下几点：
1.大方得体，不落俗套。应尽可能彰显个性，做到与众不同，方能抓住机会；
2.言简意赅，引人入胜。求职信属于应用文，言辞要求正式、庄重、准确，忌调侃、俏皮、花哨、夸夸其谈；3.充满自信，态度诚恳。自己首先得信心十足，但不能自吹自擂，满篇浮夸，不能少了敬语、祝颂语。
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Mark,
I’m writing to apply for an English editor of our school broadcasting station.
I’m qualified for the position for the following reasons. First, I have a good command of English communication skills and take great interest in journalism. Second, I was a part-time reporter in junior middle school, which developed my communication and interpersonal skills. In addition, my father is a professional editor, by whom I was deeply influenced and from whom I learned a lot.
I really hope I will be one of you. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
亮点点击
所给范文主题明确，结构完整。重点突出，详略得当。语言正式、得体、准确、流畅、地道，词汇与句式高级，摈弃铅华但不失文采。关联词语运用得恰到好处，使整个语篇衔接紧密，逻辑清楚。难能可贵的是，复杂结构和高级词汇的运用为短文增彩不少。
关联词语：first，second(排序信号词)；in addition(附加信号词)等。
亮点词组：be qualified for而非be suitable for；have a good command of 而非be good at；take great interest in 而非 be very interested in等。
高级句式：which引导的非限制性定语从句；by whom... and from whom... (定语从句连用)等。
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