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假如你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。阅读启事,并根据要求写一封应征邮件。

英语作文范文 03-10
假如你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。阅读启事,并根据要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on March 15-17, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email to Ms. Chen at chenlaoshiaef.com.
写作要求:表达写信意图;陈述应征目的;说明应征条件(性格、能力等);
注意:
1)开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2)可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
3)词数100词左右。
Dear Ms. Chen,
    I'm Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.___________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本题是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份写一封应征邮件,写作背景:在校报英语专栏你看到有关“英语文化节”的一则招募启示。阅读启示,并根据要求写一封应征邮件。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文,内容包括:1)表达写信意图;陈述应征目的;说明应征条件(性格、能力等); 2)开头已经写好,比计入总词数;3)可根据情况增加细节,使得行文连贯。考生要认真阅读前面的提示,根据所给要点,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表达出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词和过渡词,适当增加细节,以使得行文连贯。
范文】 
Dear Ms.
I am Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’ m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully. I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciate by teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
本书面表达要点齐全,上下文连贯,使用一定数量的句式结构,让句子更加生动丰满,同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语,提高文章档次,体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如:I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.运用了原因状语从句;I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了结果状语从句;I have lent a helping hand to her in sevral English activities of my class, which have been appreciate by teachers and classmates.运用了非限定性定语从句;I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.运用了宾语从句;I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.运用了I would appreciate it if句式。
 
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