阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。
One of my sisters who had worked abroad for 10 years returned home for her vacation.
All the family members were happy. My parents gave her a simple celebration and prepared food for us to share.
While staying with them, an idea came to me. We could have a family outing on the beach! All of my siblings (兄弟姐妹) agreed! It had been a long time since we went outing last time and it was the chance to do it again. We set off the next day.
The weather was nice and many people were enjoying the seawater. I ran towards the water and felt the coldness of it. My siblings placed our things in a big cottage (村舍). They brought many foods and planned to cook fish and pork meat. Everyone in the cottage was busy preparing for food while the children went to swim. I couldn’t swim though I was already a teenager. That was why I just played in the shallow part of the sea.
On the other side of the beach, I saw a small fishing boat. I never tried to ride on it, but while I was looking at it, I was eager to take a ride on the boat. Without a second thought, I went to the boat alone. I paid the fisherman for using his boat and started to push it towards the sea. In my mind, I would not go to the deep part. A few minutes later, I made it float on water and I enjoyed it! I made it move forward and kept it afloat for several minutes. Suddenly, the seawater became disturbing and large waves surrounded me. I couldn’t control the boat anymore.
Paragraph 1:
My boat was pulled towards the deeper part.
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Paragraph 2
When I came to life, I was lying in hospital.
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【答案】My boat was pulled towards the deeper part. I was afraid and nervous! I shouted loudly to ask my siblings for help. However, none of them heard me because they were too far away from me, I began to cry. Suddenly, a big wave came and I was thrown into the water. I didn’t know how to swim. I struggled in the seawater and kept on waving my hands. That was the last moment I could remember.
Paragraph 2:
When I came to life, I was lying in hospital. My parents were beside me. I asked my mother what happened. She said my brother saw me while I was waving my hands. I was rescued by him and they immediately sent me to the hospital. I was grateful that I was still alive. My mother said we would have another celebration for another life given to me. I told them the celebration would never be held at the beach.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇作文考查类型是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，我的一个在国外工作了10年的姐妹回家度假了。所有的家庭成员都很高兴。于是，我们全家去海滩上游玩。我不会游泳，驾驶小船时遇险。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是： 我的船被拉向更深的地方。可知第一段会侧重描写我在小船上遇险的具体情况。第二段开头是：我苏醒过来时，正躺在医院里。可知第二段侧重描写我是如何获救的以及我的感悟。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
However, none of them heard me because they were too far away from me, I began to cry.原因状语从句的运用。
[高分句型二]
She said my brother saw me while I was waving my hands.宾语从句的运用。
One of my sisters who had worked abroad for 10 years returned home for her vacation.
All the family members were happy. My parents gave her a simple celebration and prepared food for us to share.
While staying with them, an idea came to me. We could have a family outing on the beach! All of my siblings (兄弟姐妹) agreed! It had been a long time since we went outing last time and it was the chance to do it again. We set off the next day.
The weather was nice and many people were enjoying the seawater. I ran towards the water and felt the coldness of it. My siblings placed our things in a big cottage (村舍). They brought many foods and planned to cook fish and pork meat. Everyone in the cottage was busy preparing for food while the children went to swim. I couldn’t swim though I was already a teenager. That was why I just played in the shallow part of the sea.
On the other side of the beach, I saw a small fishing boat. I never tried to ride on it, but while I was looking at it, I was eager to take a ride on the boat. Without a second thought, I went to the boat alone. I paid the fisherman for using his boat and started to push it towards the sea. In my mind, I would not go to the deep part. A few minutes later, I made it float on water and I enjoyed it! I made it move forward and kept it afloat for several minutes. Suddenly, the seawater became disturbing and large waves surrounded me. I couldn’t control the boat anymore.
Paragraph 1:
My boat was pulled towards the deeper part.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
When I came to life, I was lying in hospital.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】My boat was pulled towards the deeper part. I was afraid and nervous! I shouted loudly to ask my siblings for help. However, none of them heard me because they were too far away from me, I began to cry. Suddenly, a big wave came and I was thrown into the water. I didn’t know how to swim. I struggled in the seawater and kept on waving my hands. That was the last moment I could remember.
Paragraph 2:
When I came to life, I was lying in hospital. My parents were beside me. I asked my mother what happened. She said my brother saw me while I was waving my hands. I was rescued by him and they immediately sent me to the hospital. I was grateful that I was still alive. My mother said we would have another celebration for another life given to me. I told them the celebration would never be held at the beach.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇作文考查类型是读后续写。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，我的一个在国外工作了10年的姐妹回家度假了。所有的家庭成员都很高兴。于是，我们全家去海滩上游玩。我不会游泳，驾驶小船时遇险。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是： 我的船被拉向更深的地方。可知第一段会侧重描写我在小船上遇险的具体情况。第二段开头是：我苏醒过来时，正躺在医院里。可知第二段侧重描写我是如何获救的以及我的感悟。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】[高分句型一]
However, none of them heard me because they were too far away from me, I began to cry.原因状语从句的运用。
[高分句型二]
She said my brother saw me while I was waving my hands.宾语从句的运用。
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