写作
今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查。请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。
参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packets
要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class
——————————————
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result, they may feel a little lonely. Moreover, looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents.
I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查，关于春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。开头已给出，根据表格内容，完成这封电子邮件。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型使文章更加生动形象。
3.短语：take part in；make more friends；be worried about；have enough communication with…。
句型：As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members.；As a result, they may feel a little lonely.；but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
今年春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。假如你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查。请你用英文给学校校刊《英语园地》写一封信，介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。
参考词汇：抢红包grabbing red packets
| Many students in the game | About 75% of them | bring them more fun; make more friends |
| about 25% of them | don’t have enough communication with their family members; be harmful to people’s eyes |
|
| Your ideas | … |
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class
——————————————
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Editor,
I am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class. About 70% of the students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment and can bring them more fun. It can bring people closer so that they can make more friends. Grapping red packets had been part of people’s lives. However, about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grapping red packets. As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members. As a result, they may feel a little lonely. Moreover, looking at the screen for too long is harmful to people’s eyes. Grapping red packets on the street might cause traffic accidents.
I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于书信作文，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查，关于春节晚会上，很多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。开头已给出，根据表格内容，完成这封电子邮件。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型使文章更加生动形象。
3.短语：take part in；make more friends；be worried about；have enough communication with…。
句型：As a result, they don’t have enough communication with their family members.；As a result, they may feel a little lonely.；but we should spend more time communicating with our family members.
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