书面表达 (满分25分)
红旗社区针对本社区居民垃圾分类情况, 计划于下周举行一次关于垃圾分类的讲座,请你代表社区写一封公开信，内容包括:
1. 垃圾分类的好处;
2. 讲座具体时间和地点;
3. 邀请居民参加。
注意:
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification
Dear sir or madam ,
I’m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification.
______________________________________________
Yours,
Hongqi Community
【范文】Dear sir or madam:
I’m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification. Given that most neighbors fail to classify garbage properly though they really try to, our community will organize this lecture in an attempt to guide this deed.
Garbage classification is of great significance. Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared. Secondly, we can undeniably make a difference by taking advantage of recyclable garbage.
To fulfill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p.m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School. Only with combined efforts can we make our neighborhood better.
Yours,
Hongqi Community
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,红旗社区针对本社区居民垃圾分类情况,计划于下周举行一次关 于垃圾分类的讲座,请你代表社区写一封公开信,内容包括: 1垃圾分类的好处; 2.讲座具体时间和地点; 3.邀请居民参加。
第2步:根据写作要求，确定关键词(组) : garbage dlassification (垃圾分类) ; fail to(不能) ; in an attempt to(试图) ; be of great significance(意义重大的) ; cope with(处理)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行追词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 ，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared.运用倒装句; To fufill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p. m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
红旗社区针对本社区居民垃圾分类情况, 计划于下周举行一次关于垃圾分类的讲座,请你代表社区写一封公开信，内容包括:
1. 垃圾分类的好处;
2. 讲座具体时间和地点;
3. 邀请居民参加。
注意:
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:垃圾分类garbage classification
Dear sir or madam ,
I’m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification.
______________________________________________
Yours,
Hongqi Community
【范文】Dear sir or madam:
I’m writing this letter to call on attention to the community lecture concerning garbage classification. Given that most neighbors fail to classify garbage properly though they really try to, our community will organize this lecture in an attempt to guide this deed.
Garbage classification is of great significance. Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared. Secondly, we can undeniably make a difference by taking advantage of recyclable garbage.
To fulfill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p.m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School. Only with combined efforts can we make our neighborhood better.
Yours,
Hongqi Community
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,红旗社区针对本社区居民垃圾分类情况,计划于下周举行一次关 于垃圾分类的讲座,请你代表社区写一封公开信,内容包括: 1垃圾分类的好处; 2.讲座具体时间和地点; 3.邀请居民参加。
第2步:根据写作要求，确定关键词(组) : garbage dlassification (垃圾分类) ; fail to(不能) ; in an attempt to(试图) ; be of great significance(意义重大的) ; cope with(处理)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行追词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。 此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰 ，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Firstly, not only can it cope with pollution issue effectively but more space originally occupied by wasteland will be spared.运用倒装句; To fufill your obligation to live an eco-life, come and join in the lecture to be given at 3 p. m. next Sunday on the playground of Hongqi Primary School.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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