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书面表达4 月 22 日是世界地球日,请根据下面的内容提示,结合实际,以 Making Every Day Earth Day

英语作文范文 05-25

in bad condition;for example;deaths;in danger;because of;destruction;habitats;human beings;clean up;pick up;rubbish;give speeches;call on;millions of;take action;depend on;take good care of;in harmony with等
第三步:连词成句
1. The air and water pollution is so serious that it causes many deaths.
2. Many animals and plants are in danger because of the destruction of their habitats.
3. Millions of people across the world do something good for the earth.
4. Some clean up beaches and water, some pick up rubbish, others give speeches to call on more people to take action.
5. What we should do is to make every day Earth Day.
6. The future of our planet depends on our efforts.
7. Only by taking good care of it every day can we hope to live in harmony with nature.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:At the same time;
2.表对比转折关系:But;Some…, some…, others…;
3.表因果关系:so…that…;because of;
4.表条件关系:only等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型,如:For example, in some places, the air and water pollution is so serious that it causes many deaths.使用了由so…that…引导的结果状语从句;Some clean up beaches and water, some pick up rubbish, others give speeches to call on more people to take action.使用了Some…, some…, others…例举的并列句;What we should do is to make every day Earth Day.使用了由what引导的主语从句;Only by taking good care of it every day can we hope to live in harmony with nature.使用了only的倒装句等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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