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书面表达 根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文,词数不少于60。假如你是李华,请你参考下面的信息,

英语作文范文 07-23
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根据题目所提出的具体要求,在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文,词数不少于60。假如你是李华,请你参考下面的信息,给学校英文广播站写一篇广播稿,号召大家绿色生活,并举例说明。
•save energy
•reduce pollution
•improve the environment
短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Nowadays green living is becoming more and more popular.                                                                    
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            
                                                                                                                                                                                    
                                                                                                        
范文】Nowadays green living is becoming more and more popular. Due to social and economic development, human beings have damaged the environment seriously, and we are faced with serious problems like global warming, frequent natural disasters and more diseases. In other words, going green means protecting ourselves.
Everyone can play an active part in the campaign. First of all, in order to reduce pollution, we can try to use public transportation or travel on foot or by bike. Besides, we should cherish what we have and make good use of water, electricity, paper and so on so that we can save energy. We can start by exchanging our second-hand books with others. Finally, if possible, classify our garbage and recycle it, so in this way, we can gradually improve the environment.
Start now and we will make a difference. That's all. Thank you.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假如你是李华,请你参考下面的信息,给学校英文广播站写一篇广播稿, 号召大家绿色生活,并举例说明。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):save energy(节约能源);due to (因为);economic development (经济发展);be faced with (面对);play an active part in (积极参与)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Besides, we should cherish what we have and make good use of water, electricity, paper and so on so that we can save energy.运用了目的状语从句;Finally, if possible, classify our garbage and recycle it, so in this way, we can gradually improve the environment.运用省略句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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