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书面表达(满分25分) 假如你是育才中学高中生李华,你获悉你们市将为外国留学生举办一场“汉语绕口令比赛”,你打算给你的好友

英语作文范文 07-25

be good at; be interested in; tongue twister ; attend; detailed; make full preparations for; in advance; be awarded with; benefit from
第三步:连词成句
1. I know you are good at Chinese.
2. Are you interested in presenting your fluent oral Chinese?
3. Now a Chinese tongue twister speech competition will be held
4. I'd like to invite you to attend the competition.
5. Below is some detailed information about the competition.
6. Participants for it are advised to make full preparations for it in advance.
7. The top five competitors will be awarded with special gifts,
8. I am sure you will benefit from participating in the competition.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:The top five competitors will be awarded with special gifts, which are tablet computers.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句;也使用了一些固定词组,如be interested in; make full preparations for; benefit from等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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