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应用文写作(满分15分) 每年的3月21日是“世界睡眠日”(World Sleep Day)。请你以“The Importance of Good Sleep”为主题,按下列要点写一篇演讲稿: 1.

英语试题 02-19

1. I feel honored to share my topic “The Importance of Good Sleep” with you.
2.World Sleep Day is annually celebrated on March 21,aiming to raise public awareness of good sleep.
3.The lack of good sleep will not only weaken the immune system,but also cause a bad mood and inefficiency.
4.Here are some tips you can follow to sleep well
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句,如:World Sleep Day is annually celebrated on March 21,aiming to raise public awareness of good sleep.这句话运用了非谓动词,使用了一些固定词组,如share…with…, aim to do sth, raise public awareness等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
 
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