读后续写A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present.
英语作文范文 02-29
读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事。
A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(顽童)was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” he asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” The boy was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish…”He hesitated(犹豫),Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted, but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” the boy went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride in my car?” “Oh yes, I’d love to ,”the boy answered.
After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?”
Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps are?” the boy asked.
注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled(残疾的) brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car.
“There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn’t cost him a cent. And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about.”
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Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride, looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “It’s more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Jack在平安夜收到了来自他哥哥的一辆车，街上有个男孩看到了这辆崭新的车，在知道车是Jack哥哥送给他的之后，男孩也希望自己能成为这样一个哥哥，Jack邀请男孩上车，男孩同意了并在Jack行驶了一段路之后提出能否在他家门口停下车，Jack同意了认为男孩是想向邻居炫耀，但事实上Jack错了，男孩跑上了楼梯……
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他下了车，跑上台阶。后文应当描写男孩将自己的弟弟抱下楼，给弟弟看这辆新车，并告诉弟弟自己有一天也会送他一样的车，这样弟弟就可以亲眼看到男孩一直想让他看的圣诞节橱窗里的好东西了；第二段开头是：杰克下了车，把男孩抱到车前座。后文描写三人开始一起乘车出行，以及那个圣诞夜，杰克明白了“施比受更有福”这句话的真正含义。他也明白了“那样的哥哥”意味着什么。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：point to, shining-eyed, be blessed等高级词汇；And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about.运用了定语从句；He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”运用宾语从句。等高级句式。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整故事。
A friend of mine, named Jack, received an expensive car from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve when Jack came out of his office, a street urchin(顽童)was walking around the shining car. “Is this your car, sir?” he asked. Jack answered, “Yes, my brother gave it to me for Christmas.” The boy was surprised. “You mean your brother gave it to you and it did cost you nothing? Sir, I wish…”He hesitated(犹豫),Jack thought of course he knew what the boy wanted, but what the boy said surprised him greatly. “I wish,” the boy went on, “that I could be a brother like that.” Jack looked at the boy in surprise, and then he said again, “Would you like to take a ride in my car?” “Oh yes, I’d love to ,”the boy answered.
After a short ride, the boy turned and with his eyes shining, said, “Sir, would you mind driving in front of my house?”
Jack smiled a little. He thought he knew what the boy wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride home in a big car. But Jack was wrong again. “Will you stop where those two steps are?” the boy asked.
注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】Paragraph 1
He got out and ran up to the steps. Then in a short while Jack heard him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was carrying his little crippled(残疾的) brother. He sat down on the step and pointed to the car.
“There he is, Buddy, just like I told you upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it didn’t cost him a cent. And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about.”
Paragraph 2
Jack got out and lifted the boy to the front seat of his car. The shining-eyed elder brother climbed in beside him and the three began an unforgettable holiday ride, looking at all those beautiful things. That Christmas Eve, Jack learned the real meaning of the words: “It’s more blessed to give than to receive.” He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，Jack在平安夜收到了来自他哥哥的一辆车，街上有个男孩看到了这辆崭新的车，在知道车是Jack哥哥送给他的之后，男孩也希望自己能成为这样一个哥哥，Jack邀请男孩上车，男孩同意了并在Jack行驶了一段路之后提出能否在他家门口停下车，Jack同意了认为男孩是想向邻居炫耀，但事实上Jack错了，男孩跑上了楼梯……
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他下了车，跑上台阶。后文应当描写男孩将自己的弟弟抱下楼，给弟弟看这辆新车，并告诉弟弟自己有一天也会送他一样的车，这样弟弟就可以亲眼看到男孩一直想让他看的圣诞节橱窗里的好东西了；第二段开头是：杰克下了车，把男孩抱到车前座。后文描写三人开始一起乘车出行，以及那个圣诞夜，杰克明白了“施比受更有福”这句话的真正含义。他也明白了“那样的哥哥”意味着什么。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：point to, shining-eyed, be blessed等高级词汇；And some day I’m going to give you one just like it…then you can see for yourself all the nice things in the Christmas windows that I’ve been trying to tell you about.运用了定语从句；He also learned what it means to be “an elder brother like that.”运用宾语从句。等高级句式。
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