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书面表达 假定你是李华。某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们未来的生活”的征文活动,要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。

英语作文范文 03-07
书面表达
假定你是李华。某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们未来的生活”的征文活动,要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。请根据你的畅想用英语写一篇短文。
注意:1. 词数100左右(开头已为你写好,但不计入总词数);
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
With the development of science and technology, ___________________________
范文】With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is now.
At that time we’ll live in a greener and more beautiful world with trees, birds, blue skies and sunshine. And we'll be able to arrange things like meals, bathing and sleep with our smart phones. Robots will be able to do most of the housework for us. As for work, we'll mostly work at home, communicating ideas for work online. If necessary, we'll have video meetings with our partners around the world.   During our free time, we'll be able to travel to places of interest in new vehicles like flying cars. We'll even enjoy space trips to the moon and other planets.
All in all, our life will become more comfortable and convenient.
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【分析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文,要求用英文写一篇短文,背景是某英文报社正在举行题为“科技改变我们未来的生活”的征文活动,要求同学们想象科技将如何改变我们的生活环境、工作和休闲方式。写作时注意发挥想象,准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【详解】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如With the development of,be different from,places of interest等;还运用句型With the development of science and technology, our life in the future will be quite different from what it is now.这句话运用了名词性从句,If necessary, we'll have video meetings with our partners around the world. 这两句话运用了省略。并注意了句子的衔接如and,All in all等等。
 
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