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假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。寒假期间,你组织你班同学参加了北京教育网站征集的

英语作文范文 05-07

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。寒假期间,你组织你班同学参加了北京教育网站征集的“同心抗疫”( Fighting against the Epidemic together)主题活动。请你根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。
注意:词数不少于60
提示词:新型冠状病毒:COVID-19;微信群:Wechat group.
 
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范文】Due to the outbreak and spread of the virus called COVID-19, this winter vacation was bound to be special to everyone. Last week, our class, under my organization, joined in an online activity themed “Fighting against the Epidemic together” released by Beijingjiaoyu, which proved to be instructive and greatly enhanced our confidence to win the battle.
Last Monday, while surfing the Internet for the news of the epidemic, I happened to know this activity under way from the official website of Beijingjiaoyu, advocating we do our bits for defeating the epidemic. So meaningful was it that I, being a monitor, informed my classmates of this activity through Wechat. Soon we had a heated online discussion on how to participate in the activity and various ideas were put forward like making videos, writing letters and so on. Eventually, we decided on filming videos as a response to this activity.
Without delay, we got down to filming the videos separately. Some expressed their thankfulness for the front-line soldiers for their sacrifice and devotion; some promised to obey the instructions made by the government; some showed great determination to make full preparations for the coming National College Examination. Watching the videos filmed by our classmates, I was touched by their patriotism and sense of responsibility. Also I strongly advocated strengthening self-protection from the disease;
All these showcased our willingness and capability to devote ourselves to fighting against the epidemic, I zipped the videos and submitted it to Beijingjiaoyu on behalf of my classmates as planned, with the firm belief that we are able to win the battle with joint effort.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇看图作文。本篇要求考生根据图片提示内容,写一篇周记,周记内容是参加北京教育网站征集的“同心抗疫”主题活动的事情。
【详解】根据图片内容,本文可以从三个方面进行叙述:
在网上看到了关于新型冠状病毒的一个名为“同心抗疫”的活动,作为新时代的高中生,我觉得有必要和责任为祖国、社会和所在的城市出一份力。
在微信群里和同学们就如何尽自己的努力进行了热烈的讨论,大家想出了很多方案,例如有的提出用录制视频,有的提出用写信。最后,我们达成一致,用录制视频的方式。
很快我就收到了大家发来的视频,有同学表达了对抗疫一线人员的感谢,有同学给大家讲述了实用的自我防护措施,及其重要性,也有同学表达了自己要努力备战高考,争取日后成为对社会有用的人。大家都用自己的方式来表达自己的责任心和决心,我被他们的话语感动了。
最后,我把所有的视频编辑在一起,发送给了相关单位。我坚信通过全国人民的共同努力,我们一定会取得抗疫的胜利。
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达,例如:Last week, our class, under my organization, joined in an online activity themed “Fighting against the Epidemic together” released by Beijingjiaoyu, which proved to be instructive and greatly enhanced our confidence to win the battle.中实用了过去分词作后置定语,which引导非限制性定语从句;So meaningful was it that I, being a monitor, informed my classmates of this activity through Wechat.使用了部分倒装。这些句子的使用不仅让文章色彩纷呈,也展示了作者扎实的语言基础。

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