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假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mick 向你咨询如何预防新冠肺炎。请你用英语写一封e-mail，要点如下：
1.不要去人群聚集处，外出时要佩戴口罩；2.注意个人卫生（勤洗手；保持居所清洁……)；3.提高免疫力（多休息、适度运动、均衡饮食…….)。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数
参考词汇：sanitizer洗手液 immunity 免疫力
Dear Mick,
Now, I will give you some tips for preventing COVID-19.________________________________
Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mick,
Now, I will give you some tips for preventing COVID-19.
First of all, during the emergency period of COVID-19 prevention, try to reduce outdoor activities, such as playing outside, participating in all kinds of parties, shopping in malls and other public activities. Wherever you go, you should wear a mask, which is the most basic measure to prevent the infection of COVID-19. Secondly, wash hands frequently with running water, using hand sanitizer or soap. Keep your room clean and often open windows. Thirdly, in order to improve individual immunity, drink more water, rest more, avoid staying up late and do moderate exercise. Last but not least, follow a nutritional and balanced diet and eat foods after they are fully cooked.
Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mick 向你咨询如何预防新冠肺炎。请你用英语写一封e-mail，要点如下：1.不要去人群聚集处，外出时要佩戴口罩；2.注意个人卫生（勤洗手；保持居所清洁……)；3.提高免疫力（多休息、适度运动、均衡饮食…….)。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：emergency (紧急情况)；prevention (预防)；all kinds of (各种各样的)；sanitizer (洗手液)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First of all, during the emergency period of COVID-19 prevention, try to reduce outdoor activities, such as playing outside, participating in all kinds of parties, shopping in malls and other public activities.非谓语动词的运用；Wherever you go, you should wear a mask, which is the most basic measure to prevent the infection of COVID-19.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mick 向你咨询如何预防新冠肺炎。请你用英语写一封e-mail，要点如下：
1.不要去人群聚集处，外出时要佩戴口罩；2.注意个人卫生（勤洗手；保持居所清洁……)；3.提高免疫力（多休息、适度运动、均衡饮食…….)。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数
参考词汇：sanitizer洗手液 immunity 免疫力
Dear Mick,
Now, I will give you some tips for preventing COVID-19.________________________________
Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mick,
Now, I will give you some tips for preventing COVID-19.
First of all, during the emergency period of COVID-19 prevention, try to reduce outdoor activities, such as playing outside, participating in all kinds of parties, shopping in malls and other public activities. Wherever you go, you should wear a mask, which is the most basic measure to prevent the infection of COVID-19. Secondly, wash hands frequently with running water, using hand sanitizer or soap. Keep your room clean and often open windows. Thirdly, in order to improve individual immunity, drink more water, rest more, avoid staying up late and do moderate exercise. Last but not least, follow a nutritional and balanced diet and eat foods after they are fully cooked.
Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mick 向你咨询如何预防新冠肺炎。请你用英语写一封e-mail，要点如下：1.不要去人群聚集处，外出时要佩戴口罩；2.注意个人卫生（勤洗手；保持居所清洁……)；3.提高免疫力（多休息、适度运动、均衡饮食…….)。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：emergency (紧急情况)；prevention (预防)；all kinds of (各种各样的)；sanitizer (洗手液)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如First of all, during the emergency period of COVID-19 prevention, try to reduce outdoor activities, such as playing outside, participating in all kinds of parties, shopping in malls and other public activities.非谓语动词的运用；Wherever you go, you should wear a mask, which is the most basic measure to prevent the infection of COVID-19.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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