祝贺信 教案

Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文是一篇邮件类作文。本文要求考生一李华的名义给好友古丽写一封祝贺信，祝贺她今年被评为“新疆最美少年”，考生在成文时候应注意：合理发挥想象力，使得文章的表达自然丰满，文章的写作要点要齐全。要点包括：1.表达你诚挚的祝贺；2. 简要描述鼓励的先进事迹，如乐于助人、孝敬父母，品质兼优等。3.表达你要向鼓励学习的意愿和美好祝福。注意：文章的人称以第一人称为主；时态应为一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇be chosen as, sincere congratulation on, extraordinary, insist on和高级句型，以提高文章档次；恰当使用连接词meanwhile, therefore等，使得文章表达自然、流畅。还要注意在规定词数范围。
【范文】
Dear Guli,
I have learned with delight that you have been chosen as “the Best Teenager in Xinjiang” recently. I’d like to offer my sincere congratulations on your success! You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.
You are such an extraordinary example for us. You are often seen helping those in trouble or in need. At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint. Meanwhile, you are always among the top students at school. Therefore, it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.
Your success has greatly encouraged me and I hope that you will achieve further success in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the news.宾语从句；
it came as no surprise to me that you got this honour.主语从句。At home, you insist on assisting your parents to look after your disabled brother without any complaint.非谓语动词做状语。
 
Writing 4
假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的外国笔友Peter获得了“汉语桥”中文演讲比赛一等奖。你为他感到骄傲，并给他写一封祝贺信。
内容如下：

1. 取得成就的原因；
2. 继续努力；
3. 希望见面和交流。

注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：“汉语桥”Chinese Bridge, “中文演讲比赛”Chinese speech contest被剑桥大学(University of Cambridge)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1.向Reed表示祝贺；
2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；
3.请教学习方法
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
Dear Reed,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本文只是给出了主要写作要点，写作中要注意从三个面进行叙述，并自己补充一到两点，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键词等问题，注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺，写作中注意使用连接词、序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going with you recently? I am more than delighted to hear that you won the first prize of “Chinese Bridge”Chinese speech contest. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your achievement.
As we all know, it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success. In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress. But in order to achieve more in your study and embrace a better future in your life, you’ d better go on studying Chinese harder. Eventually, would you tell me when it’s convenient for you？I feel like seeing you and communicating with you.
Sincere congratulations to you again!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点击】
亮点句型一：it is your hard work and persistence that lead you to the current success.运用了强调句式；亮点句型二：In the past few months, you have been devoting time and effort to practicing Chinese every day, because of which you made great progress.运用了非限定性定语从句。