短文改错Dear Mr Smith, I'm very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will buil
英语试题 08-29
短文改错（共10小题；每小题2分，满分20分）
Dear Mr Smith,
I'm very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will build a non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so, for they can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and also can do good to other customers' health. Since you have given up selling cigarette, the customers which don't like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping center may cause fire, which was very dangerous to both your possessions and the safety of the customers. In word, the non-smoking supermarket will not affect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
1.去掉much 2. they改为it 3. and改为but
4,cigarette改为cigarettes 5. which改为who或that
6. smoke改为smoking 7. was改为is
8. word前加a 9. To改为On 10. health改为healthy
Dear Mr Smith,
I'm very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will build a non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so, for they can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and also can do good to other customers' health. Since you have given up selling cigarette, the customers which don't like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping center may cause fire, which was very dangerous to both your possessions and the safety of the customers. In word, the non-smoking supermarket will not affect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
1.去掉much 2. they改为it 3. and改为but
4,cigarette改为cigarettes 5. which改为who或that
6. smoke改为smoking 7. was改为is
8. word前加a 9. To改为On 10. health改为healthy
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