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书面表达(满分25分) 假定你是李华,你所在班级将于本周六下午到四川宋瓷博物馆参观。请你给你的外教John写封邮件邀请他一同前往。内容包括:

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书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你所在班级将于本周六下午到四川宋瓷博物馆参观。请你给你的外教John写封邮件邀请他一同前往。内容包括:
1. 参观时间和地点;
2. 活动安排:参观宋瓷博物馆;听专家讲座;亲手制作瓷器;
3. 参观之前准备:简要了解宋朝的历史
注意:1. 字数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear John,
__________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to visit Sichuan Song Porcelain Museum together with our class from 3pm. to 5 pm. this Saturday.
There are various scheduled activities. On arrival, we’ll admire the charming and delicate porcelains following a guide to appreciate the wisdom of Song people. And then, we are to attend a lecture delivered by an expert, through which we can have a better understanding of these precious treasures. The last but the most fascinating arrangement is to make a porcelain with our own hands.
By the way, if you would like to come, you’d better briefly learn about the history of the Song Dynasty in advance. I’m sincerely looking forward to your presence. Please reply soon.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是一篇应用文写作。假定你是李华,你所在班级将于本周六下午到四川宋瓷博物馆参观。请你给你的外教John写封邮件邀请他一同前往。
【详解】假定你是李华,你所在班级将于本周六下午到四川宋瓷博物馆参观。请你给你的外教John写封邮件邀请他一同前往。内容包括: 1. 参观时间和地点;2. 活动安排:参观宋瓷博物馆;听专家讲座;亲手制作瓷器;3. 参观之前准备:简要了解宋朝的历史。分析可知,应该以第一人称为主,一般现在时和一般将来时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点,运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言,难点在于选择词汇和句型,可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来,这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述,同时注意谋篇布局的顺序,运用合适的连接词连接全文,同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Knowing that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to invite you to visit Sichuan Song Porcelain Museum together with our class from 3pm. to 5 pm. this Saturday.宾语从句的运用。And then, we are to attend a lecture delivered by an expert, through which we can have a better understanding of these precious treasures.定语从句的运用。
 
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